lierdumoa
Awkward turtle fanfic situation

ifshehadwings:

So … I just read this fic.  HUGE longfic, like nearly 100K words.  And it was AMAZING.  I loved everything about it.  Except the author DESPERATELY needed a Yank picker.  I kind of wanted to throw things because I kept getting pulled out of this really excellent story by all the petrol and bonnets and torches and such.  

Is there … a way to mention that in a comment without coming off like a huge bitch?  Anybody?  Bueller?   

Now you’ve got me morbidly curious. How bad was it? Did someone angst about his/her dead “mum”? Were 18 year olds drinking with impunity at the local “pub”? 

As a huge bitch who Yank picks via comment, I recommend bracketing each criticism with positive feedback. Brevity is key. If your critiques grossly outnumber your compliments, don’t bother commenting.

And look on the bright side. At least no one’s butchering old English. I’m of the firm belief that anyone who uses “thee” as a subject pronoun is beyond help.

  1. lierdumoa reblogged this from ifshehadwings and added:
    Yeah, usually in that case I try to leave a more generalized comment, like — “You’re a really great writer! I love the...
  2. ifshehadwings reblogged this from lierdumoa and added:
    It was pretty bad. Like litres of petrol per kilometer bad, in addition to a lot of terminology and dialogue issues...
  3. monsterkeys reblogged this from ifshehadwings and added:
    La la la just gonna leave this here!
  4. calystarose said: have you interacted with the author before? the only thing I can suggest is striking up a conversation with her. maybe indepth feedback? and then, as the conversation progresses (assuming it does) you can work in the whole linguistic thing.
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